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Tired of this life
Tired of this world
Tired of this sky
As I take flight
Into this dream
I float away
Not to return
To another day

The people I hear
The voices say
"Lord let him stay,
Another day"

As the voices fade
Away I tell them
"I won't stay"

Upon my head
she lays a kiss
Telling me "I will
be missed"
©2004-2010 ~seifer-chan
:iconseifer-chan:

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Poem of Me flying away into another life.

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:icon3rd-floo:
really an interesting piece. It feels as if its part of a dream of a child, being laid to bed...

--
"Let us not look back to the past with anger, nor towards the future with fear, but look around with awareness."
-- James Thurber

The Grid Bug nimbly evades your kick
The Grid Bug Bites
You Die
:iconvaelroth:
Not exactly dark poetry. pessimistic yes... but not really dark. Its a good start certainly and free verse is divine, i don't care what coma says.
:iconin-a-coma:
ok Amaria's real comment time:
Ok , you need you need to get the stanza/rhyme thing fixed. I'd like to see you have a rhyme scheme (that thing Mrs. DeLo taught us) but then again it's ok w/o.

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:iconin-a-coma:
:clap: glomp.... I love you babe

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